I redrew an old picture! It's this one: [link] I also changed her outfit a bit, because I didn't like it anymore... Ohh, and here is the Draw-this-again meme: I will also upload a speedpaint of this later!:3
The original meme belongs to *Bampire BG by run from Pixiv
critque: The composition has a positive, nice and lively outcome, the colors fit each other well, i love that they are mostly pastel colors, and only the eye has a brighter color. The dress is very creative, it reminds me of chocolate cookies and makes me want to bite it. The face is really beautiful, i especially love the shading on the hair it's really adorable. The hands are good too, i love the perspective.
The only thing what mades it look a little funny the legs position. They are in a strange angle, in real life she couldn't be able to stand with that balance. (note that i make this mistake all the time too..). Didn't wanted to make this offensive, still i'm not a good artist, and this is the only mistake i've found, and i needed to look at it so hard to find it, cause it's not a big mistake.
Hope i had satisfied you with the critique c: This is my personal opinion, the group can't be bashed because of it.